All Comments on 'Cinder Whore'

It will be interesting to see how she escapes these control freaks. They seem to have it all planned out. Do I foresee a prince rescue?

...I can't believe I read the entire thing... WTF is wrong with me?

There is a warning at the beginning of this story. I personally loved it and look forward to more chapters.

I agree that this is partly miscategorized. It is more of a rape/abuse story than a traditional incest story. With that being said I do hope that there is more to come.

It looked like it could be a good development to a story but I agree wrong category. This story made me sick to my stomach

The ideas I have planned for the next few chapters are not all non-consent. I felt it was better to go with the incest/TABOO category, as that theme fits with the coming chapters. Also, to anyone who thinks step family sex isn't incest, I'll tell you it is usually classified that way, but even so, this is also a taboo category.

I love the comments, when they're constructive, good or bad. If you just want to be hateful because my stories are too intense, you should have read the warning label. Thanks!

Great job, and yes it was intense but a great intense.

That was the most horrible thing I've ever read. The only redeeming quality to this story is that it's not filled with misspellings and bad grammar. I had to skip to the last page just to see if you could redeem yourself but instead you soundly failed. Not even with her pledging to find an escape could drag this from the depths of deprevity that you had sunk it. Now I'm going to be stuck watching the news to see if some sick minded individual like yourself didn't act on this story and torture some innocent girl in this shameful remake of Cinderella. For the sake of the rest of us, please never post another story like this again. You idea of intense is vastly wrong.

Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing! It was intense but it was a hot,sexy inense! One of the best i have read and i have read a lot. Great job.

Wow, I really had a hard time not reading it. I did want to see what she plotted, but I guess that is for another time. Whew!

Loved it, don't listen to those losers. Can't wait to read more :)

It took me forever to figure out where I wanted to go with this story, but I've got it going now!

Keep writing - and quick!

Omg this story was amazing... Ive read the other chapters now too... I couldnt stop reading :)

Other than that, this was a good story

This is my go-to story when I need a quick orgasm. I hated the direction you went in later chapters, but I love the middle of this chapter enough to keep re-reading it.