All Comments on 'Cindy Emma'

It's a good start, but I'd like to see this go even further.

So first why did the brother has to live with his aunt and uncle where is the dad . Second the sister turns into a slut and he is OK with it not mad or upset that his sister is fuck around and when he does find out again it like he seen a dog walk across the street or something don't write again please give up

The fact that you claimed in a preface that you would explain the motivation of one case, and then failed to do so indicates the is some deficiency going on.

Stories with reading from the low 3 stars to high 4 stars tells me something is up there.

Are there more than 1 author here, and the seriously less talented one is the author of this story?

This wasn't a story. It was more like a synopsis of a newspaper article.

I'm almost curious to see what earned the high marks on this profile, but there isn't enough in this one to get me to do the work to read another word from this profile.

Empty. The story was,...hollow ?

Where is the characterisation? Where are the descriptions? This is so flat that it is only two dimensional at best, this reads like a poorly written legal statement, purely the facts with no embellishment.