All Comments on 'Circus Town'

This made me wet! Then it made me horny!! Then it gave me chills and goosebumps!!! Then it made me a little scared!!!! What a HOT, HOT, HOT, story!!!!!

Ten stars Mr. Swiftt! Ten Stars (though it would only allow me five.)

.............too many basic grammar errors for me to carry on past the first few lines of page 2.

Page 2 and I was out of there. Too bad because the story has promise. If that is the best you can do with the language, it is hubris indeed to use the term "famous author." Get an editor.

The trivial errors were so sad! Spell checking only catches misspelled words not wrong words - would have been a great ghost story without the trivial problems.

The errors in the first paragraph alone should have told me not to keep reading, but I gave up before the end of page 1. EDIT or get someone to do it for you.

I agree that the errors are noticeable, and they do detract from the story. If they make a reader give up on the story, then I believe that’s the reader’s loss, however. I did enjoy the story. Thank you for writing it, and thank you for sharing.

A lot of sex and not much story content. Then a sudden “What the hell”? Oh well, your story, not mine.

Sorry but I couldn't get past all that 1%-er pretentious name dropping i read through the first half page. Probably because I'm only a 5%-er. I couldn't stick around to find out why y'all didn't already have the love of your life.