All Comments on 'Cities of Power Ch. 01'

There is a large chunk of text missing from the end of this story. I am attempting to resubmit it. My sincere apologies to my readers.

The final page of this chapter is here now. Thank you to those people who have revisited the story for your patience.

~ellie

… why this wasn't more highly rated. Excellent first chapter!

So much telling instead of showing

Interesting start and nicely written, details explaining the importance and now we will await the ongoing hunt or? May the little girl, trix, has outgrown her tiny steps and is ready for adventure

Ten Motorcycle 🏍️🏍️🏍️🏍️🏍️🏍️🏍️🏍️🏍️🏍️ and stars ✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨