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by CDROM1717

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Gumby603Gumby603about 3 years ago
Good start

I really like your characters

PurplefizzPurplefizzabout 2 years ago

“Of course apparently she lives nearby” in that last paragraph sounds awful, a better and more natural sentence would be “she probably lives nearby”, but otherwise quite short chapters but I’m enjoying it!

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Grew up out in the country, more specifically a small town in the foothills of the Appalachian Mountains. Also, I'm literally the son of a third generation farmer so expect a lot of farming stories.

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