All Comments on 'City Lights... Country Nights'

by JakeRivers

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DG HearDG Hearabout 16 years ago
Good one! Good Buddy

Thanks for the invite to write a story. This was another winner for you. Readers can see why you won the Valentines Day contest.

With the highest respect

DG Hear

_Lynn__Lynn_about 16 years ago
Another winner.....

from a fantastic author. Great job! Thanks for including me in this mini-invitational.

DesertPirateDesertPirateabout 16 years ago
Well done!

An enjoyable tale in familiar settings, love the bit of old characters as his folks. It adds something to the story with familiar people and settings. Keep doing these invitationals, they are great!

Nightowl22Nightowl22about 16 years ago
Really love your stories, Jake.

I am a sucker for happy endings, I guess. This story is well written and really enjoyable. Keep it up.

PhilipinNorcalPhilipinNorcalabout 16 years ago
Nice job, Jake

Really written well. You very nicely portrayed "Big Jim" as the 'everyman.' The romance had very credible bumps along its way as do real life relationships. Engaging characters, very pleasant story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Enjoyed

Enjoyed the characters and the story. Thanks.

RePhilRePhilover 13 years ago
Heartfelt story Jake

Really like your writing Style as a Northern neighbor (Montreal canada) I really enjoy the pictures you draw of Texas in your stories. Looking forward to your next one

RePhilRePhilalmost 13 years ago
Back again Jake

Loved it again for the first time! LOL

RonRWoodRonRWoodalmost 13 years ago
Yes, it's good

what can I add. Very good.

Norka7221Norka7221over 11 years ago
Beautiful Love Story

What a great story! Not only did it evoke empathy for both main characters, but it also included all the family members in a loving way. Please keep them coming...

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 10 years ago
Maybe he did need Holly

Or maybe he just needed to finish growing up and happened to do it with Holly -

But the love you have when you get past your hormones is a much greater thing than the lust based one -

A few find both in the same person the first time 'round - good fer 'em -

Nicely done thank you sir -

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
:-)

Jack, you spin a good yarn. Another feel good story., definitely worth the read.

BfreetorunBfreetorunabout 7 years ago
I like the stories mixed in with the country music songs.

I was not raised as a lover of country music but after being married to a fan for over 60 years I have grown to like a lot of it. I did not realize how good a singer that Ray Price was until after he died.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Great story. Of course as an old Texan, I enjoy reading stories about my homeland. Thanks, Jake. 5 stars, without a doubt.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
WOW

Can't believe Kelly would hook up with Jim the creep.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I don’t know about that Kelly. Jim took a bullet for her, protecting her and her kids, and instead of her going to the hospital to make sure Jim was ok, she gathered up her kids and ran home to momma. For a month. Heck, he could’ve died in the hospital for all she knew. Had it been me I would’ve had serious doubts about marrying her. It seemed to all work out, I suppose,

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