All Comments on 'Claimed by a Goo Girl Ch. 01'

More please!

Title says it. Very interested to see where you take this.

Have a great labor day weekend. 😎

Other than some minor errors, this is a great story!

Great beginning; hope there is more coming.

Good story had to read the whole thing at once.

can't wait for more :-)

The story has a few different elements to it than I thought it would. The future possibilities for your story are looking good.

Great stuff keep em comin

Although if you decide to write more on syd and lexi instead, id be one happy camper

This story is really cool will their be an update?

Here's hoping we can see more of this, soon.

Maybe I am somehow abnormally enthralled with your plot concepts but I honestly find your stories to be some of the most interesting ones I have read. I enjoy the fact that you are trying things most authors in this site don't, even when they don't work it's an adventure. I hope in your future stories you get a more expanded sense of logical emotional development, right now some of that feels abbreviated. Your physical descriptiveness is great and your creativity is your greatest strength imo. I love the themes you are exploring. Keep em coming!

Please for the love of Lara please I need more!

I'm new to Literotica, and I gotta say this is amazing! This one of the first stories I read which I haven't regretted experiencing at all. Not trying to over flatter you but your story is the reason I stayed on this site and decided to create an account to add you and this story to my favorites. I hope to read more of your creative work.

This was enticing, amazing and real all at the same time. The characters and story kept me reading this to no end and I cannot wait for more!

I'm actually creating an account just to keep updated on this series!! Keep them coming!!!

But, yeah...

That was actually pretty damn powerful stuff.

I hope this isn't the end of this tale.

Not only great erotica but great literature,.please please make more to this and make it a series it was amazing.

Loved it, and it's so unique! Please wrote a sequel or 10.

I’ve come back to reread this story several times and each time it’s always as fresh and impactful as before. The other reason I come back is that I’m hoping to find the next installment to your amazing and captivating narrative. Please keep up the great work!

Awesome Story with a small Error. I think you mean Lara when it says Tara but was easy to figure it out. Hoping for a lots of future Chapters. Just pure Greatness.

I am very curious to see where you take us in the next chapter.

Ok the police are there.do they arrest him or what?

I gave up after the robber fight. It went way too goth and cucky for me. I just can't; god, that is a waste of a build up.