by capn_doggy
I am into this one now too! You have got to finish something. I don't know how to save these without leaving tabs open on my browser.
Honestly, I’d quite like to see more in this line. These characters live, they evolve; you’ve crafted a tale that is easy for me to lose myself in the reading of. By all means, please do continue this story if there is more of it to be told.
A damn good story,love the plot where boys Father sacifices himself to try to bring back the boys Mother,but instead brought a Teenage Demon Succubus that feed on cum to survive,so now instead of getting his Mother back he has two Sex-Crazed Monster Girls to keep him satisfied.Go Dude You Rock!!!!
Have read most of your works and like it all so far keep up the fantastic content.
Holy shit Batman, I never even saw that weird twist of events coming in a million years, rofl!
But hey, a new bit of world they have to save, two dangerous, amazing, ummm, women...ahem...that want/need/desire him, twisty goodness!! Please write more! :)
I'm planning on using the slime concept in Exalted. There are a few typos, but overall great concept. I can't wait for more!
Gonna be waiting for the next chapter on the edge of my seat! Great story!
Didn't see the last bit coming! Five stars, looking forward to the next chapter.
This has been a beautiful story so far, the romance is an awesome touch. I'm not to good with words, but keep doin what your doin!
I loved the first chapter to this story so much I could even remember it now over a year later. I am so glad you’ve carried it on and the second chapter is even better. I really hope you continue this story and preferably at a faster rate between chapters so we’re not having to wait a year at a time <3