by CruelLines
I thought this could not get any worse but I was wrong again, I can't see how this type of treatment is good for anyone, no matter how much they want it, is there any chapter that can be written without trying to hurt Katy
Love the intrigue. Sophie is a devious woman and has learned (do we know where) how to manipulate Katy. Love the scene of her kicking Katy and the wet uniform and the discipline! Yummy.
I don't know why your story doesn't have higher ratings. Normally I'm extremely picky and disregard the majority of writing on here, but this is a fucking gold mine. I blame you for getting my panties all wet. As a lesbian, it's nice to see a character like Sophie share the same sort of ruthless, genuine (and maybe just a tinge unhealthy) brand of sadism that I feel. Never thought I would find a character on this website that I - heaven forbid - relate to. Off to read the rest!
I admit this is well written but it just ramble on and on. Very little is the least bit sexy. After 4 chapters I think I will stop reading.
Sophie is a bitch, does she not realize that working in wet clothes after drying your skin can leave you susceptible to chills which can evolve into something worse.