by CruelLines
You really got me hooked on this story. I'm not normally into the S&M, but do enjoy reading some. I'm really enjoying this story. I just hope it doesn't get to extreme, but I would keep reading anyways. Can't wait for the next part! Thank you. Keep up the good writing.
SB
This is so tenderly written. I love the way you manage to incorporate such full bodied emotions into this story. It truly taps into the raw vulnerability, tenderness, and strength inherent in a good s and m relationship. I also love the fact that this is between two women! Please keep up the good work
maybe i am a little evil, but this is wrong to treat or be treated
After finishing this chapter it's easy to understand stand where Sophie's evolving feelings show. And that clears up the struggle that she elaborates in her inner thoughts. 5🌟
This chapter saw it all coming together and some of the mystery unwrapped. Excellent writing, thank you