All Comments on 'Claiming the Kid Sister'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great premise.

Terrific buildup.

But once the sex started it rushed ahead too fast.

Lacked details.

Could have also been more dialog with her giving instructions as to what she wanted done, and how.

Could have been at least a little more ass involvement. Spanking alone just didn't do it for me. Maybe at least a little touching/rubbing her asshole, with her clearly enjoying it, before concluding that he's save fucking her ass for another time.

Could easily have been five stars.

Four stars.

rbell42rbell42almost 2 years ago

I love this story. We all can envision the Teana-type. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome story. It needs a sequel

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