All Comments on 'Claire'

Instead of shooting his cum into the air, why didn't he take her pants/panties off and put it where it belonged, possibly making a baby in her? Since this is a fantasy story anyhow?

Loved the way you didn't rush in, you set the mood perfectly!

The ending left it open for sequels which I'd love to see.

It would develop, and add depth to the story if you gave even more background and description into the two characters, while describing the way their relationship unfolds.

Such a hot story tho...

MORE MORE MORE!?

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Yeah, good story, made me wet from start to finish! But more detail and he should get her pregnant! That would be hot.

A great story that just goes to show it isn't always about intercourse. Sometimes it's what leads up to the act that's the most exciting. Well done.

Very good story. Many older women should help teen boys in the same way. Keep up the writing

Lacked authenticity and character. This woman would have been horrified in the moment. I know this writer can do much better.

Reminded me of my youth. My friends Mother was an alcoholic, and I came to see my friend, and she was in the living room, and she made a pass at me, and the next thing I knew, My pants were around my ankles and she was blowing me. She let me kiss her tits and feel them, but, that was a far as I ever went with her. I still see her today, some thirty years later, and she looks good for an old lady.

Let's have more older woman/young boy stories.

So did her pussy lips get wet from her secretions too? We need more of this one, even if she is too old to get pregnant.