All Comments on 'Claire's Night Out at the Club'

Can't wait for Clair to bring Derrick and Sean home.

Next time get down there and eat up all that BBC cum. YUM YUM YUM

Nice story, thank you for sharing it.

Try to use your characters names a little less repetitively. For instance, if you have already established in a paragraph that it's Jake talking to Claire, instead of saying Jake said, you can say he said, or her husband or a euphemism like "her husband replied". When you are reading, watch for ways the author establishes who's speaking or acting without using the characters name, to avoid being repetitive. :)

Great story. I so love black cock, nothing like it xoxoxoxo Annette

I cannot believe that Jake did not get in there and lick up all that Black cum!

When I got to the end, I could not believe that Jake went into the bathroom to rub one out. I would have eaten her pussy and then refilled it again. Yeah, she might have passed out, but earlier she did ask him to fuck her. I would have fucked her and hoped she woke up to find Jake fucking her with the BBC cum inside her. Sloppy thirds. oh yeah!

I certainly agree with Anonymous, all four of them. Rather than put it off, I might have fucked her in the parking lot, but I'm certain that I would have been in that pussy as soon as I got her home! There she was, legs spread and BBC cum leaking out of her pussy. Yep. I'd have nailed her right there. And it would NOT have been making love! That would have been fucking her, pure and simple

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i agreewith all the rest i would have sucked he cunt and fucked her some where that nite

ans he would want me to

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A nice, simple, very hot story.

I hope you follow up with the 2nd installment.