All Comments on 'Clara'

by S3lwyncd0g

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
It's ok

Way to quick. Has easy potential to be a great long drawn out story. Ending came too quick. A good secret affair even while the father home would amplify the story as well

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 5 years ago
Beautiful of love

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex.

linnearlinnearalmost 5 years ago
Damn Fine Writing

Very enjoyable and I really liked it being set when it was in time. I thought you told a beautiful story of love and not just wild sex, not that I don't like that as well in a story. Thanks again for an entertaining story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Loved it

As a young mother my self I loved the story .

I too did enjoy teaching my son the art of love also. My husband would take long trips

I had lots of time with our son and he would stay with me in our bed .

Nutman99Nutman99almost 5 years ago

What a great story. I wish I had an older woman around to teach me the art of incredible sex.

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
GREAT STORY. ^*!^*!^*!

Well done, only a little too short. It was written,

the story line great.

...THANKS...

xsiveonexsiveoneover 4 years ago
Five was not enough.

Great story! Good build up and quick and to the point. The time line brought back many memories from my youth. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Excellent

I wish that Literotica had a requirement that anyone wanting to post was required to read a well written story like yours first. To many are of the warped opinion that simply typing words, or letters that are suppose to be words, is all that is required. Many of these kids have apparently never passed an English grammar or composition class. You, thankfully, have proven this to be a major requirement. Thank you.

old_riderold_riderover 2 years ago

WOW!!! Great writing. Wonderful and well written story. Just too short!!!

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 2 years ago

Great story! I absolutely loved the ending. 5*

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I love to read really good erotica and daydreamed my own stories as I lay waiting for sleep to come. Some I shared with my wife. Finally she started encouraging me to write and submit them here. I hope you enjoy them.