by Floraefemme
Very well written, very much enjoyed, would love to read more from you along these lines.
I think your story was written well and in the next chapter with teaching " little " brother, you should make it hotter in steps as this could become a multiple part story. Sex it up a little with his beautiful sister using her charms to teach him more. He needs to learn to respect women but also know he should use his big dick and heavy cum load to make women feel cared for, maximize how good it feels as he bangs them hard and well but no hurting. Get to respect the power his big cock has but be kind and gentle when he has sex with a women but make sure he uses his tools to give her a mind blowing orgasm too. Respect must be there so he does act bad. I sure hope you write more chapters as this has the potential to be a big hit. Thank you. Maybe, he show his sister's pal how much he's learned. Thank you.
If you are willing to make it a series it would be good to have him play with his sister another couple nights then have him play on different nights Jenny and Ava also. After he builds enough confidence from his sister or if he meet them at collage and has fun with them
Great story until the end. I hope she changes her mind and keeps the baby. I’m quite sure with your writing abilities you can continue on with this story and they get together permanently and of course with her girlfriends thrown in for him to practice on. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Sorry, but you made the sister sound like she was full herself in the first half page. No wonder bro didn't want talk to her. Stopped reading.