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Anonymousabout 10 years ago

Gud writing

Gr8. Nicely nuanced. keep on writing. Hope there's a sequel.

Anonymousabout 10 years ago

i would have started the fun in the water when it was so small, that way i coul feel it grow inside of my mouth

im gonna hafta find me an older man : )

lovelylori79@gmail

Anonymousover 3 years ago

VERY GOOD EFFORT

It's 130 in the morning and I am fighting sleep. As I read this story I'm wondering where this is going and consider calling it a night. I'm glad that I didn't as I love how this developed. I very much appreciate her confusion and inner struggle before deciding to take the swim. And moving forward to losing her dress and laying down on the towel, I so appreciated how dad posed her and instructed her to hold her legs open for him as he dined. I LOVE THAT MOVE AND RELISHING IN TASTING A WOMAN FOR THE VERY FIRST TIME. So yeah, Starova, thank you for your creative thoughtful, highly erotic efforts here. Tomorrow I shall explore more of your jewels. You make me want to explore more with this 5 star effort. Much appreciated.

Jim

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