All Comments on 'Clare's Humiliation Ch. 01'

..have been a good story if it weren't written in the second person.

... written in "any" person. Don't listen to Ms. Anonymous. This is a great story and I look forward to more.

I HAVE WATCHED MY WIFE SHOW HERSELF LIKE THIS OVER 100 TIMES! ITS FANTASTIC!! GREGUK

However I understand that some males would get excited over this stuff.

and you the term YOU..did this and YOU did that..are control freaks. and I just don't like control freaks. As a rule they are the scourge of mankind. They usually are murderers and rapist...

To r petey: your comment shows you to be a stupid sick motherfucker. Only a sick motherfucker would like this crap.

THIS IS A WELL WRITTEN TALE... GOOD SCENARIO GOOD CCHARACTERS AND OU CERTAINLY COULD WRITE MORE OF THEIR ADVENTURES..

As a woman, I thought the author did a pretty good job of getting into a woman's head. A woman would have been more self-conscious of the flaws in her body... the dimples in her ass, the slight sagging of the breasts, etc, but still convincing.

As a writer of erotic stories I prefer to use first person, but I sometimes use second person when I'm really trying to get into the head of my audience. You've done an effective job with it, I think.

I'm shocked by the vitriolic comments, truly. This is a well-written and erotic story.

gr4eat story more please you can write one for me soon poor claire

Lovely very erotic, made me wet ;)

The story feels real. That is a compliment. We share the mixed feelings of Clare