All Comments on 'Clarice'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 4 years ago

Great story! The first wife is like the dog in the manger: not really wanting her husband but not wanting Clarice to have him.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Wonderful story very well written. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymous16 days ago

Good story. The issue is as others do in their stories, too short of an ending.

The writer spent a great deal of time excellently telling their story in great detail

then abruptly ends it. Should have finished the ending to match the rest of the story.

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I'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...

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