All Comments on 'Class Reunion Meeting'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

This story desperately needs an editor! The overall concept is great, the flow is good, but there are so many grammatical and punctuation errors that the reader is distracted.

Rapier875Rapier875over 8 years ago
Loved it !

I really like your style of writing.

It helps you think up good plots, develop great characters and tell a hot story as well !

I'm so looking forward to part 2 !

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