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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
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5 stars

nice bild up

want to read more

linnearlinnearabout 4 years ago
Loved The Teasing Banter

I would very much like the see more of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
please more

Very good start

Frankie1952Frankie1952about 4 years ago

Very good start to what could be a sexy romance btween these two. Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Brush up, on your Italian!

It's "sotto voce," not "socco voce."

Otherwise, good beginning for a story, and I loved the cheeky by-play between the characters!

madtaffcatmadtaffcatalmost 4 years ago
Excellent!

You wrote a 5-star story with no physical contact - amazing! More please...

moblanemoblanealmost 4 years ago
Next 'opus' please, make it an opera... in latin terms!

Brilliant story without the physical 'fumbling ' and groping. I am certainly ready for a more explicit continuation. To borrow a little from classical music the story had a very erotic timbre while the motif of nakedness added much to the plot. It was a bit like the "Jaws" theme being so dominant that in only3 notes the specter of a menace appeared. The inevitable coupling needs to be carefully planned to meet the expectation of this masterful beginning. The next 'movement' should compliment this most enjoyable opening to create a perfect symphony of erotica Great Job, I loved it and would read, with great relish, your addition to this tale. 5***** Thank You

FamilyGuy1963FamilyGuy1963almost 4 years ago
Cold or not?

He walks home with a heavy coat on because it's cold!

Mother is lying naked in the back garden! ???

That apart it is a good beginning to what could be a good story.

SweetAmber89SweetAmber89about 3 years ago

You are tagged as one of my favorite authors. This story is one of the reasons why, and hell yes I am going to part 2 right now.

HoltarenHoltarenabout 3 years ago

Brill story. More, please.

SteamerPoiny68SteamerPoiny68over 2 years ago

A good start...... always leave the audience wanting more, & you, Wirdsmiff, certainly have !!!!

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