by fireandlace0533
Nailed my fantasy..... absolutely loved it. I hope to see more.
This is my number one fantasy and at 40 years old, unfortunately I am in the same boat as him. I would love to find a woman to help me with this fantasy. Great story, thanks for writing and sharing.
That was awesome! So very erotic and kinky! And a great cliff hanger. I certainly hope there will be a part 2! ;-)
..and the dialogue is pretty good also. However, the text is full of errors - at one point you even got mixed up between Amy and Jennifer. I recommend you withdraw this and proof-read it properly, if the site will permit it.
You nailed it! Thanks - great, entertaining story and what an ending!
I used to get my ex wife to fuck different guys many years ago and tell her to come home with a full pussy for me to lick clean. It was always such a horny experience. We eventually ended up having MMF threesomes with male friends and the whole thing was just so much hornier, especially with lots of oral all round.
Mistertea WTF .... I can't understand how someone who has made no story submissions of their own can have the nerve to contradict anothers excellent attempt at a story, even if there are a few slight errors in there and then to go on and suggest that fireandlace0533 might want to withdraw the story and proof read it is rude.
These are all fine comments from a member who can't even be bothered to answer any questions on their own profile page or have you withdrawn your answers to proof read them.
I thought it was an excellent submission and the content outweighed the slight errors...let's have chapter 2.
What a great erotic story.
Fabulous descriptive writing - and super hot.
I wonder what will happen next??
Good story with enough description to make me feel “good”. Props to F&L
Great story - must be a part 2! Jennifer gets her revenge by fucking Dave and making yer man clean up...
I think it’s so hot I could light my cigarette off of it ! That was solid and intense til the end then it was explosive !!! Great job !!!
Outstanding, love all the buildup and atmosphere, well done!! You MUST publish part 2 asap!!!
A VERY EROTIC STORY!
Late in life, I learned my sexual purpose is to orally worship and please Women.
Awesome story, I would love to have a Amy to clean up and make her feel a good tongue fucking.
More, More, More....Please! I loved it! How's he going to tell his wife that they were just . . . ?
So very HOT 🔥. I also love smelling used panties and a woman's scent. I would also love to eat a creampie from another man, even if were my wife's pussy, or my neighbors!!!