All Comments on 'Client Privilege'

I note that this is your first submission and I must congratulate you on a story well told and very, very erotic. I do hope that you will continue to write and a follow up to this would not go amiss.

That was quite a debut. Getting me to read to the of a story written in present tense is a real accomplishment, I can tell you that You’re a talented writer, and I hope you continue this story soon.

This story was great short and pleasurable exactly what i was looking for

Wonderfully tense, highly erotic and captured in perfectly paced story. Please write/contribute more.

Hoping you're not a "one-hit wonder"...

You can’t leave it like that! Please tell me that there is another chapter coming?

Amazing story!

Great story.

5/5

Please continue to write stories. I really enjoyed this one and hope there’s a next chapter.

Dear Jesus that was hot...I mean, sweltering...It isn't just the story itself, which is fantastic, but it's how you told the story. I'd love more of these two but I can also see where this is a decent ending. I mean, Natalie said that the case is solid...although, I kind of want to know if Reese gets Albus, lol. In any case, wow...I'm a fan.

Very well written. Can't wait for your extension of this story or any other new story coming from such a talented author.

J

Loved the story.

Just too fucking hot. I like the slow burn but this really worked for me. I wouldn't change a thing. I really like these two so will be watching in case you do continue their story. Thank you

nice story and that was hot. oh i hope there's more from this two or write some more stories, please.

I love how well you told this story and developed Reese’s and Natalie’s characters in just a short space of time. It pulled you into the story very quickly.

Not only was this super sexy, it was extremely well-written and smart. Which made the story even steamier. Bravo 👏🏻

Beautifully written story.

Well written, erotic, believable, exciting. Thank you.

Such a good flow and pace! Super hot scene. Looking forward to seeing more of your work if you decide to share it.

The story was hot but if it is to continue it needs a lot more of an emotional connection.

This is hot as foockkkkk!!!!

I love your writing.

Very nice first story. I hope to see more from you.

This was so hot, definitely need you to write more!!

Very yummy indeed. I would love to read how things turn out for these two. Thank you!

Fantastic story...

Very nice indeed. Although I couldn’t help thinking that there’s a lot of beautiful women out there, but many fewer good lawyers. [None of the women lawyers I’ve known over the years have looked like Natalie, I’m afraid, but then, none of the men have been the sorts to inspire erotica, either. Still, it helps to dream...]

And, as I read the latter half of the story, I kept hearing Satchmo singing, “and baby, if I’m the bottom, you’re the top!”...

Was it $300 an hour or $400?

When using ‘baby’ as a name, it needs to be capitalized.

Stories like this are better in the past tense.

Strongly recommend an editor.

Just as a comeback to an anonymous comment. I’m a stickler for grammar, and nothing jumped out at me. The $300/$400 thing could be clarified, but that really doesn’t matter. Baby as a nickname does not need capitalization, and write in whatever freaking tense you want. I’m probably being overly aggressive, but I’d rather people leave criticism where it’s actually needed, which isn’t here.

In any case, this was extremely sexy, and I like how Natalie remembered to be professional at the end. It’s probably going to be hard to find someone as good as her, but if Reese’s case is so open-and-shut, she doesn’t need the best. I love all of your stories, and normally I’m asking authors for continuations, but I would love to see more one shots like this!

Thank you so much for writing brilliantly and sharing it. If you want this story to be a one night stand/ rebound affair, it's perfect where it is, if you want it to become a proper relationship between two of them, it will be an emotional ride especially with Dillon in the mix who deserves her own story.

Great start to what many are hoping will be an extensive library of stories. Tight and well written. A bit short for my liking but I can see you have 2 series so will start on the next and I'm sure that will satisfy my desire for length.

No real need for an editor though the one error ($300/$400) is a glaring one. However, it is useful to gave someone to do a final proof read just to pick up things like that.

Overall, a great effort, easily worth 5 stars. Now for another; after adding you to my favourites.

but other than that, fine story

Excellent. Please continue

Names and nicknames ARE capitalized.

Come here, Honey. The bees make honey.

Come here, Baby. The baby was cute.

Get out of here, Asshole. His asshole was sore the next morning.

You can rant about people trashing this story, and I agree with much of what you wrote, however you should make sure you are correct in your comments if you’re bashing someone for trashing the story.

To the author: Nicknames are capitalized, just so you know.

The beauty was in its simplicity I will gladly read more thanks.

Want more

'I'm not saying 33 is old, but I feel old when I'm at a club with 22-year-olds trying to get laid and find their "authentic" selves.' This story is full of great character-oriented observations like this. Really good writing.

I wanted to give 10 stars, simple yet erotic and loving. It had everything that I want from a lesbian story, in fact I want more of the same, why couldn't this wonderful author give us more of these sexy characters

This is Masterpiece! As a straight man, I was always hard when I was reading it! Right on!

breath/breathe? so common an error for so simple a word.

would illiterotica be a better name?

Critical about a spelling error in a very erotic, extremely well written and engaging story with great characters and a good plot!? Well, from one anonymous coward to another, get a freakin' life, man. This is a great short erotica piece, any way you look at it!

Simple, cute and wonderfully hot.

I would love to see a sequel of course but this works wonderfully as is.

Thank you for sharing with us!

Another fav! <3

Seduction, how I love seduction. So well done!

Really hot and well written

God, you're good.

WHOA! That was hot!

AWESOME!! LOVED IT! Very HOT!

very enjoyable!

Part 2 of this please?

This is the feeling all women should experience and they may have a deeper appreciation for life itself and that its really a beautifully added feature in their lives that can develop into whatever direction it takes them. I love your story as it was beautifully written in an upper class scenario and also because of the sensuality, honesty and seductive love transpired that expands the reality of what real sex is all about. Women have a lovely gift of pleasure that men should take into account that women needs.

Oh lover, yes I said LOVER, because, for me, you are one amazing authoress lover.

Everything I have read of yours initially gets me hot with anticipation, then my breathing increases, only to be followed by an ooze, a very wet ooze between my thighs as you prepare me for my fingers, and, oh fuck, this brought me to orgasm before Natalie and Reese... Phew, don't stop here, there MUST be more and more. One orgasm is never enough, from a story such as this!

Loved it, definitely needs a second part

Dear writer

I’m in the middle of “a certain tension “ and the story just disappear , could you tell me where i can finish it?

If you plan to published it ,I would love to buy it , please let me know .

To the reader on here who is asking about A Certain Tension. I'm sorry you weren't finished when it was taken down. I do plan to publish so I'll update my bio once that happens.

To all other commenters on this-- this was my first story. I know there are mistakes. Sorry you can't read my other work on here now.

Goodbye you will be missed, Sarah Pain has stolen more than just your work I've read three different stories of hers so far that were stolen from authors on literotica, goddess knows how many more she's stolen !!!!

What the dilio is going on. Please explain.

Sucks that Miss Callahan is gone. That was one of my faves

I'm so sorry for what's happened to your works! I'm sad looking back, not knowing that a re-read would be my last time with your stories. I hope we'll be able to read more of your work in the not so distant future. Each installment you put out-- the writing just kept getting better and better. Your stories were a gift, and theyll be deeply missed. thank you.

lie/lay...audible/intelligible...lots more...perhaps its a lesbian thing?

I am so sorry what what done to you. Apparently someone can infringe on your copyright without much ado. You will not be without legal protection, but I know it can be very costly to get your rights enforced.

You and your wonderful stories are dear to me. I hope this will not discourage you to write - and publish - more, for you are truly talented.

I miss you so much :(

Excellent story, well written. I'd like to read more about Reese and Natalie. Thank you. 5star.

I stopped by to see if there was anything new and am very sorry to see what happened. I am also angry.

I'll just leave it with 'ditto' to what Cindy1001 said below...

Me again and I'm still angry! :)

I was cruising through stories I'd read and I came across 'Ed0613'.

This author includes a copyright statement at the bottom of each story he posts. I don't know anything about this, whether its effective? - the cost, etc. He includes his email in his profile so if you're interested...

I loved this story.... was hoping for more. Maybe one day

A great beginning to what was surely destined to be a wonderful story. From the first paragraph I sensed it was the work of a master, easily at the level of a professional writer.

I am sad and angry about what happened, and can quite understand if that is why you didn't continue.

I'm sure quite a number of Literotica stories get plagiarized (happened to someone I know personally), but I don't think they get sold for profit through sites such as Amazon.

I'd love to read your other works, but I wouldn't consider buying any that were stolen.

It kills me that my absolute favorite story ( MissCallahan) and favorite author are no longer here :( I loved all your stories, they awoke so many new exciting feelings in me. Hope all is well.

I agree with Maezed . Every week (at least) I come to check if Miss Callahan or New Horizons is back. I miss them so much. The characters. The stories. I read this and found myself wishing I could read your others the whole time. Literotica isn't the same without your stories here. I hope you'll be back one day.

Lovely writing. Be nice to hear more about these two.

You are a great writer.

Awesome story! Please continue the storyline!

I loved coming back to read your story. I miss all the others.

Saddened to read you have left Literotica; you were one of the best new writers. Don't suppose Amazon is helping to identify & prosecute your thief? Please udate your bio if you do publish elsewhere so we know where to find you.

My god, this was such a hot read! Love the build up and the sensual description of the sex. I don’t usually cum from reading a story, but I did with this one. Wish I could read more. Thank you!!!

I really enjoyed this story, FFF. Thank you for leaving it up here for us to enjoy. I’m sorry that you’ve been ripped off by people who can’t see past trying to make a fast buck off your creativity.