All Comments on 'Clocksong Ch. 03'

I haven't read steam punk in a while, but I like this. It moves fast but is as clear as it needs to be. Hints at the technology used abound, but still with not all revealed. Creates intrigue, and just the right amount, too. I'm anxious to see this unfold. But, I'm still sad about the death of Huli. Such an interesting character to die so soon. Are you positive you wanted to kill her off so quickly?

Good question! But yes I am quite certain. She is integral to the plot still and her character will unfold a lot more. I’m playing around with exploring character development in the past tense, in that, her character has developed, but we learn about her story and her character more as the story goes on.