All Comments on 'Close to Sis Ch. 02'

I really enjoyed reading this story. It is a wonderful story, both parts are great. You should continue writing this story as I can't wait to read what happens next.

I would like to see how they handle their love affair in their everyday lives now that they have consummated their relationship. What will they do in the future? Will they want to be as husband and wife, have a family of their own? I hope that the author will continue the story to tell their future. Thanks .......Rich

Please continue.

This is one fantastic story. Please write a third, forth, etc chapters soon.

a little to unrealistic for me if he felt so bad he would have found a way to stay out until bed time or he would have found a way to stay at a friends i wish you writers would stop trying to rewrite human nature this story sounds like it should be on the twilight zone

I love these first 2 chapters & I can't wait for you to write ch.03 +. Please do so soon. As far as unrealistic is concern Who Cares. This story is great entertainment. Most of the movies made are unrealistic & no one complains about them. Keep on writing.