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Click hereWhen she came in I asked how her "date" had gone. She was flushed and excitedly told me it was a lot of fun and described the San Souci and all the people who were there and the food and the wine. She was still excited, but, I wondered from the dinner or from the kiss. I asked if tried to pull any funny stuff. She just laughed (a little nervously?) and said no, he was the perfect gentleman. Perhaps in another age kissing the top of a woman's breasts and giving her a prolonged kiss is a sign of a perfect gentleman.
"Let's go to bed," she excitedly exclaimed. Wow - she was like another woman in bed, very aroused and excited. It was a new height for our sex life. I had to admit that John was having a positive affect on our sex life.
I liked this story but is it his wife or his fiancée? It seems to go back and forth.
A woman too stupid to marry and if you di you deserve all the heart ache she will bring....
Is there a formula for this kind of story? Pretty much the same an another wife dates story.
I loved the story. All of your stories are terrific. The slow seduction of the fiancée was delightful. I hope you post more.
Way too stuffy writing. Will never understand British use of language. Action unbelievably too fast. 2
Excellent story in every way, well told and perfect characterisation. There are real people just like these so very credible too.
I don't usually tear into a fellow author, because I do respect their right to pen whatever their heart desires. BUT, my first bitch here was the title had little relevance to the story. She perhaps accidentally displayed more flesh on the beach, but she seemed unaware, more than secretly pleased.
My complaints:
One- A closet exhibitionist is a wife that goes to a strip club, drinks too much and gets talked into getting on stage. Then, after she begins and the men respond she gets into shaking her bare goodies at them. I got to this story from the random spinner and the title intrigued me.
Two- The author should warn a reader that IT IS a CUCK story, some like that, Ok, but not me -I would have moved on.
Three- Not knowing the nature of the tale, I read on, getting madder by the minute. I got pissed when the wuss allowed his fiancee to DATE the guy. That is what it was.
Four- The disrespect the old dude showed, beginning with the first phone call, mandated a response, physical if necessary.
Five- Kissing her tit, then prolonged on the lips, WTF?
Six- I totally lost my shit when he dressed up as a chauffeur, drove his betrothed without her rings to the event.
Please provide warning when you are going to develop a character of such weak traits........ Please.
feeling better? Open mouth and you show others how ignorant you really are. Right?