All Comments on 'Closeville Ch. 1'

I love the powerful characterisations and originality of this bizarre tale. My travel agent has been unable to provide me with any information on the whereabouts of this cosy hamlet, Closeville!

What a weird ass town! After the initial shock of everything and the whole situation, I did cum to like the story, especially that she came to loke it too. Great writing, real imagery!

I'd love to hear more from these characters. I love it. What happens to the other couple? Can this new girl help? What else is "messed" up with these people in this town. What happens to Emily? Etc... I loved it! great Story.. Orginal and refreshing!!!

Please continue the story.

More! More! More!

This was a great story. I want to hear more.

Please consider writing about Jeff and tara. I would love to know what happened to them after the reception.

I hope part 2 is on the way. :)