All Comments on 'Closing The Deal'

Really enjoyed it, thankyou.

Gonna have to go and read the rest of your submissions now! :)

Both of your stories are great. Please keep the story going.

Both stories are magic how about the three of then get together & keep it in the family untill the next contract need signing

Love the story. Would love to read more.

Whew... I need a towel, then a shower, then... OMG that was good!

Just as I suspected after reading "Discovery" - this was hot, hot, hot! Keep up the excellant writing. Looking forward to many more submittals including a continuation of this family's loving ways.

Very sexy and well written. Keep on writing.

Please keep this going and turn it into a series, it is so hot. If you do keep to one title as it is easier to follow and not miss any chapters. Love your writing style.

LOVE THIS VERY EXCITING STORY. CLOSING THE DEAL.

READING THIS VERY EROTIC STORY WAS A FANTASTIC FANTASY.

EXCELLENT WRITING. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.

Yes another great job hope you keep them cumming,

love to see a family 3some now

Before on your other writings I gave you a '5' & a 100 - but with this I gave you a '0' & a 'O'.!! This is just like a sex story that would come out of California or Florida with the dip and dive crap that goes on there everyday as a way of life - I was expecting better from you than a slut story.! I won't read your next story or any more of your writings. No thanks. JAG/TSO

Good news- that last moron (THINKS 2hot4u) won't bother you anymore, if he keeps his promise. Well written, and again very erotic. Expand the series, in same name, please.

Potential is good, and may lead to other series.

I think my heart may explode from the furious beating! What an awesome erotic sexy and devious story! WE need much more from this mom and her daughter. Please?

Please write more about Cheryl and Stacy. I wa so hard reading this story. I loved watching my wife and daughter make love. It was beautiful, often tender, sometimes a raw hard fuck, and always erotic.

have done it a BIT differently. I think paul should have directed their action and , as Cheryl was making Stacy cum , fucked Cheryl from behind and then directed Stacy to eat his cum from Cheryl. While she was then doing that , he gets hard and fucks Stacy from behind and afterwards the women go home and resume their lovemaking alone.

Very good story it is amazing to me even though I would never do anything like incest to my family I enjoy it when it involves others. Don't know what I would do if got to watch something like your story such as Paul got to watch.Keep up the good work I am liking the daughter better each story.

what a sexy story. very well written. 5 stars

Very imaginative and enjoyable, if a trifle rushed. The characters were subtly developed and felt real, and the sex scenes were built to a convincing finale. I loved it, so I've got to give it five stars.

I concur with nogravy's comments. The only thing that I personally would have enjoyed would be to have had the father somehow involved during the final scene. Keep 'em coming . . .