All Comments on 'Coastal Desire'

HOT, and then some! I hope this is just the beginning of a story that has many more chapters about this sexy fivesome. This was an easy *****s.

Man, you have made my bisexual desire come full circle! I've wanted what you wrote for so long. It's time for me to do the real lustful thing with a friend rather than just dildo myself to pleasure. My lust for the taste of his come and my asses desire to be filled to completion has become unstoppable. Then to eat her after he's filled her is my dream desire!

I loved this story with all the bisexual fun. I have had so many bi encounters in threesomes and foursomes and it is the best sex one can have. This was a very enjoyable and horny story.

Good story. Break up your paragraphs and cut away what you don't need. Keep writing.

Very entertaining story. Left me wanting more. Sounds like there could be a lot of fun ahead.

I enjoyed the twists and turns immensely. Very erotic, well written. You have the chance to expand on what you have written to turn on a lot of other men, like me.

Hope you write more! Gave you a 5.

I loved it my dick is throbbing now

I had basically the same fantasy that you described in this story I wanted my brother-in-law to let me suck him until he came in my mouth and then put it in the ass but I never let happen.

I rated this story a 5 hoping that encourages you to write a follow up that includes a foursome with the wife and girl friend. Hot bi sex that can withstand the pressures of life and succeed.

Great story! Can’t wait to see what happens next!

I’d like to find a gay lover I could share with my wife