All Comments on 'Cobalt Blue Ch. 09'

by Pelaam

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dreamcatcher7dreamcatcher7about 17 years ago
lovely

As always, wonderful. Thankyou

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
anonymous

please keep writing, really love it

sugarfairy1137sugarfairy1137about 17 years ago
great as always

You rock. I love every single one of your stories. Keep writting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Awesome

Keep it coming!!

MilliemoonMilliemoonabout 17 years ago
Great

Another great chapter of this story. I love the way you are interweaving a little more of their everyday lives into each story.

Millie

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Another enjoyable story in this series.

Darby4186Darby4186about 13 years ago
Don't forget

Don't get me wrong, I love the architecture of your words- the passion and heat come alive with every visual description and breath of desire. But (and I hate being reduced to a butt man) I feel like the story line gets weaker and weaker. We need the time to let our own spent aperture recover while getting lost in the intriguing details. I love what you write, I just would like more to chew on:)

Anonymous
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