All Comments on 'Cock of Ages Ch. 03'

Hot and funny... I laughed out loud many times. The wings were over the top.

Made me laugh a lot, and kept reading even though I was done just to see what the hell he would do next. Great read.

Ah this is great :) Thank you again.

This is very very funny! You must have "Blazing Saddles" genes in your blood to write this perverse stuff! Well done, even with the continuity screw ups about the duct tape and temp tattoo.. no matter. I liked it. Fun read.

The "Time Machine" device has been well used but I like your use of the idea without bothering about the machine or technology itself. If your point isn't the phycs of time travel, then best to just leave it alone which you did. The concept of going back in time to save the world is always a cool device but I liked your sci-fi-fantasy story just fine. Reminds me of "Barbarella" with Jane Fonda... Mostly fantasy with a sprinkling of sci-fi for "realism."

So anyway good job. I don't have the skill or dedication or story ideas that you have to write so I suppose I could have just left this at that without the pretend critique... oh well, have a nice day!

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I love this paragraph: "It's human nature, a much-maligned but terribly important component of humanity. Girls like to fuck. Almost as much as guys. Some moreso."

I wish I'd have known that 30 years ago. Still, knowing that NOW has helped. A lot.

Your protagonist has a sick sense of humor. I like it. That business with the Fadeaway White paint to make a farmhouse into Heaven was inspired, you'll forgive the pun!

And the series is getting boring. Nothing new. :(

I really liked the premise too.

Hahahaha! Not only is this well written, its humorous too.

Excellent series so far.

Fucking genius

this one is hilarious. well-thought out and full of humor that engages your audience. well done! :)

Okay that was a rather fucked up story, but it was also epic-ly awesome. A preachers daughter screwed and impregnated by a fake angel form the future and told to start a pro-sex cult of Christianity specializing in blow jobs. How do you even come up with this stuff?

Awesome story and I give you a 5/5 and a fav mark.

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Blessed Be

This is so terrible but I can't stop reading.

What an interesting thought that you have 'enlarged' upon! Well written and certainly a joy to read!!

you just broke my record of best stories