All Comments on 'Cockfight for Sandra'

by electricecho

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SteelSaurusSteelSaurus5 months ago

It had a lot of back and forth that felt for the most part, uneventful up until the midpoint and climax. The 'overt' violence in particular detracted from the cockfight appeal. I think that portion could have been dropped to have the story conclude on the second page.

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