by silkstockingslover
This story is wonderful and I like where you are going. Keep up the great work.
I really like this series, I love a man in control! Please hurry with part 3
Plus, I love the storyline leading up to the action. There's far too many stories that jump right into the action without the backstory.
A 5 star for sure. Felt like I was there in the story. GREAT!!!
Just found out about this site by googling and I somehow ended up on your stories page.. all I can say, the ones I read where amazing, like this one. Although this one was a bit short, cant wait for part 3
Oh fuck, I wish it were me I just love to get totally drunk on cunt juice, and never get tired of eating out cunt and sucking clitty, then sliding my big cock into a tight wet cunt and fucking our brains out
Your writing is raw and sensual all wrapped into sexy! (with nylons, of course!) Anxiously awaiting chapter 3 my dear!
Drew :)
your story is great I first read your chapter 1 the day it came out and have been waiting for this please continue
THE BROTHER'S A PSYCHO....A TRUE SOCIOPATH....SERIAL RAPIST MATERIAL......ASIDE THAT, ITS ALL BEEN GOOD SO FAR.
PLEASE CONTINUE.
If you're planning on making a series out of this, you have to make Anthony a little more likeable. I think half of us reading this want to stab him right now.
While I agree that Anthony is not very likable right now, there definitely needs to be MORE!!!
Yes you should continue but decide if she will be submissive or more part of a loving relationship
I have read several of your works and enjoyed all of them so far. If you are anything in real life as the stories you write then I would like nothing more than to be your friend.
BigMike_63303@yahoo.com
Now that you created ch 1, you were able to experiment and get sexier in this chapter. can't wait for the 3rd!
Really hoping it isn't another long wait for the 3rd chapter. Hottest story I've read on this site so far. Do you have a rough estimate for when it will be done?
Part 3 is currently in the works...hoping for a late June release...
I disagree about Anthony. I feel that even though incest is wrong in real life, a fictitious character should be as "sick" as possible. Everyone who reads incest stories clearly fantasizes about it, but would never act on it. I love all your stories, so keep up the good work!
C'mon! Hurry up you Freudian Jew!
We need more corruptive anti-Christian pleasure here!!!!!!
Anthony wasn't nearly as abusive or dominant as he was in the first chapter, but he is still a typical newly-civilian short-termer that gives soldiers a bad name. That said, his shift from sexual hunter to sexual gentlemen didn't seem out of character and gave him some much needed depth.
First off, I agree with Sharkman regarding incest and stories.
Good story. In future chapters (even after the first four...hopefully) I think you should give us some more back ground on why Lilly was able to accept and enjoy sex with Anthony, her brother. That just doesn't happen everyday. SSL, how about a chapter entitled: A Year or so Later?
that was fucking erotic, shes a fukken virgin but an amazing cocksucker, dammmmmmnnn, I wish I had a hot cocksucking virgin sister to suck me good and me lick her good
Been binge reading your stories and each one is excellent. This series tops the list, so far. I have been hard reading them beginning to end. Great stuff!
It really bothers me how many times the words Baby Sis appear in this story and so close together. We're aware that they're siblings at this point, the repetition felt creepy to me. No real person talks to their family like that. But overall a pretty hot story.
This is a very hot story about the intimate relationship developing between a loving brother and sister. I can't wait to see where it leads.
Great series
Really well written. I thought you were in the US until you spelled a couple words the. European way. One of the best i have read. One thing, most women don’t wear panties with panty hose. That is why they are called panty hose.
204. Interesting how the comments have changed from the first episode to the second. You do make stories real and hot. I like brother-sister sex. Wish I had a sister.
Very intense depiction of the best jnseen dispkay if iral talent. You ARE the best, ma’am. 🔥🔥🔥🔥
So far this series confirms that the brother truly only cares about himself. He threw his sister a bone. How he wants her viriginty, both vaginally and anally, because he wants it. He demonistrates no concern for her psychological or emotional well being. With a brother like this, his sister does not need any enemies.