by scarlettresses
Please keep writing my wife right this story and then showed it to me and she loved it so much she can't keep her hands off me
The author shows a very lazy trait in using' '&' all the time rather than 'and' which becomes distracting and insulting to the readers after a few times. Go back to grade school and learn proper writing.
A story full of the good, loving feeling that's so often missing. True erotica, not just porn. I really enjoyed reading that.
One of the best I've read in years here. Not a useless exercise in sex like so many others. Erotica involves the Brain as well as the libido. Excellent work, please keep it up!!!!!!!!!!
You nailed one of my wildest fantasies spot on! Very good writing. Sensual! I felt like I was there.
story is so well written and this plot line was wonderfully pleasing. the & could've been used a bit less but it was barely noticeable throughout the story. great job!
I was so pleasantly surprised by how well it was written and how hot it got me. It was an amazing story, and I absolutely loved it. I hope you consider writing a sequel!
Very nice First Time story. Needed just a little more info on your main characters. Hope this is continued. Five Stars.
Come on guys the average dick is about six (6) inches. That means there are as many below the six inches as there are above six inches. At one time every fucker was reported to have six inches and that became 8 inches which has now become 10 or 11 inches. Every fucking author keeps increasing the guy’s dick and where will it ever stop? Will the 10 inch dick soon become 20 inches? Come on guys stop this stupid shit of giving your fuckers outrageously long dicks. Why call out any length at all? Saying your guy has a 10 inch dick or longer just fucks the story and not the woman. Most women probably cant take a dick much greater than six inches let alone 10 inches.