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by pmarlowe

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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 15 years ago
jesus

Kimono was beautiful, but this.........

I can just imagine being there with my lover.

Sweet and beautiful. Thank you

SimonBrookeSimonBrookealmost 15 years ago
You seem to have fans in Scotland!

That was indeed a very, very nicely constructed short piece. Bravo!

deariemedeariemealmost 15 years ago
Exquisitely written

This story made me shiver with longing. It's a very sweet story, actually. You moved me deeply.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Delicious!

As before, perfectlon in a story. Every careful detail describes your delight in the telling. The "Daddy" ingredient adds spice to a most erotic piece of writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great story!

Would love to read more exploits with Sam. It would be interesting to hear about Sam from the beginning.

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

****That was HOT and Cute and maybe not in that order. Thanks for sharing.

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Down these mean streets a man must go who is not himself mean, who is neither tarnished nor afraid. Which is some fine writing that I didn't do. But I write well enough. And I adore younger women.