by Pixiepowers
That was one hot read, the sex didn't last long but I think that was the right move, you got the balance just right to keep me hooked until the very last word and your ending was spot on! Wonderful first story Pixie and welcome to Literotica.
~ Jenn
This was one very well written piece of short erotica. You didn't waste time with every single detail . . . you left some blank spots in the story, which allows the reader to fill in the blanks where the action seems to jump from one point to another. Nice characterization was detailed while still maintaining the mystery of anonymity. Extremely entertaining piece of work, this is. The only complaint I have is that you don't have any other pieces available to read. This is seriously good stuff, and I would very much like to swap stories with you if you're so inclined. I'm always looking for people to collaborate with.