by geronimo_appleby
Quite well written, and despite Astrid's dominating behavior, very erotic as well. The sticking point for me was bringing up Marion's marriage. That took the story from an erotic one to another cheating wife story. Being seduced into the relationship with Astrid and her girls simply means she's now vunerable to blackmail or a dom/sub relationship which will eventually undermine her marriage.
I really liked your story. Please give us more. I saw another comment that he didn't like the fact that she is married. I think it played into the story very well. Not just a frustrated image of a female, but someone who gets in touch with the additional feelings only masturbation can bring. The addition of the 3 female friends just adds to the excitement for me.
This turned me on alot. Thanks!
fantasyman999@yahoo.com
The storie was written with the feeling I felt like the fly on the wall. I read it with my Venus 2000 stroking me slowly to the edge! Love your other stories also on the club! Please write more of those hard grippers and fir petters!
I missed out on a REAL opportunity by NOT joining the neighborhood coffee-klatch.....