by MrMsScrewloose
I never knew there were so many guys with little dicks that can't take care of their wife.
"Fiction. But what fun this would have been..."...As a fantasy this is a good one...3*...In reality this wouldn't end well...or his girlfriend didn't marry a man that didn't respected her as a woman, or he wouldn't have married her, because she showed that she was easy...
So, in other words, you really couldn't think of anything good to actually say about the story. You just don't like people have their own opinions. Got it.
It was great; so erotic and if only a little longer I would have given it 5 stars. However, my rule is that 1 page stories are never rated more than 4 stars.
The only thing I didn't like was the claim that it is fiction. My wife and I as well as many others we know have experienced similar situations. When my wife and I first hooked up we agreed anything goes as long as it is consensual and no lies. She also agreed to never wear underwear as we are both exhibitionists and voyeurs. BARE469
My husband started to show me off when we first started dating. I began with one of his close friends and after about six months of teasing, led to an incredible night of sex with both of them. It opened a whole new fabulous world. He has shared me with well over a hundred different men (and women) to date. From close friends to a stranger we met on the beach in the Cayman Islands. And we are more in love today than ever.
Good girl, every wife's cunt should get a little fresh cum inside every once in a while...
from the woman's perspective. Very erotic. This would fulfill a lot lot of men's fantasy, watching another man playing with your woman. No falling in love, just straight forward sex. A turn on for both. An easy 5.πππππ
Wife enjoyed this story, She just wanted to be the lady in the story
Stories are always more erotic if written from the point of view of the female who has natural concerns about a threesome. You did this and added a good dose of reluctance from her. I do the same in my stories.
πππππ [5 (4.75 = 95%)]. My kind of wife sex story. Sharing one's wife must be an act of love btwn the boyfriend (husband) and his wife (girlfriend); they both must trust the 2nd man. Having said that let me add that your wife-sharing story is a sex story and a love story, two in one! THANK YOU!
This story has so far got 64 faves out of 69.7k views wich is 0.92 faves per 1k views, an excellent faves-to-views ratio!
This story and you as the author have a solid fan base.
Bravissimo! I like this story very very much.
Excerpt from the story (SPOILER ALERT):
Quote.
You trying to show my underwear to this guy? He can probably already see my panties."
"Sure."
"Well what if I don't want him to see my underwear?"
"That's easily fixed: take them off. Then he won't be able to see them." He smiled his evil, lecherous grin. Thinking with the little head again.
Unquote.
βββββ (5.0)!
This is a wife sharing story and a love story, two in one! I wish something like this had happened to me.
Loved it! πππππ (5.0).
I copy pasted an older public comment:
"AnnetteBishop - almost 6 years ago
Nice
Loved the story, made me very hot. Thanks"
Loosescrews seem to appeal more to the childish cucks who aren't able to use real words.
This is a wife sex story and a love story,
two in one.
It is erotic, realistic, and even romantic.
βββββ (five).
This is a five star story.
Excerpt from the story (spoiler alert!)
Quote:
"What? You want him to fuck your girlfriend? Seriously? Just like that? You want him to stick his dick into me and come in my pussy?"
"Yes, I want him to have you. To get into you, to feel how delicious your insides are. To pump into you, deep, hard. To come in you. To add his hot juices to mine."
End quote.
I am copy pasting an older comment, which says it all:
AnnetteBishop - about 6 years ago
Nice
Loved the story, made me very hot. Thanks
Erotic. Romantic. Consensual. Almost poetic.
πππππ- (5-).
I wish something like that happened to us when we were in our mid to late 30s (we are same age.) We discussed that but my wife chickened out.
SPOILER ALERT!
Excerpt from the story:
"We went to bed immediately and fucked again. Made love. And kissed and cuddled and played way into the night.
"It didn't hurt our relationship at all. The excitement of it, thinking about it, retelling it, made for many hot sessions in bed for years afterward. We married, and we're still together, and this is still a hot memory for us both."
Very very erotic. I would say it is romantic as well. A five star story. You won't go wrong if you read this one-page story.
I am copy pasting an older comment:
"AnnetteBishop - about 6 years ago
Nice
Loved the story, made me very hot. Thanks"
Re lc69hunter 4 or 5 days ago:
Yes, the story is romantic indeed.
(In my book it is erotic too.)
I am copy pasting another user's comment:
"boradda - over 3 years ago
Oh My God
Wife enjoyed this story, She just wanted to be the lady in the story"
Very exciting story, and well paced. Not rushing to the climax, if you'll pardon the expression. Pity it's fiction, but you may change that!
This wife-sharing story is a sex story and a love story, two in one!
THANK YOU!
I am copy pasting this comment
(my sentiments exactly!)
"CumSlurpingCuckold - over 6 years ago
Good stuff.
Good girl, every wife's cunt should get a little fresh cum inside every once in a while..."
Needless to say I gave this story a 5.0=100%
EXCERPT FROM THE STORY.
SPOILER ALERT!
Quote:
... It didn't hurt our relationship at all. The excitement of it, thinking about it, retelling it, made for many hot sessions in bed for years afterward...
End quote.
Beautiful flow in this story, pardon the pun! Erotic. Thank you for this well written piece!
Excerpt from this story.
Quote:
"You trying to show my underwear to this guy? He can probably already see my panties."
"Sure."
"Well what if I don't want him to see my underwear?"
"That's easily fixed: take them off. Then he won't be able to see them." He smiled his evil, lecherous grin. Thinking with the little head again.
End quote.
Great story. You said this was fiction but it also could be true. A similar story was told to me over a few drinks. Keep up with the stories yourβs has a nice flow ( no pun intended) to it.
This story has hitherto got 93 "faves" out of 90.3k views, an excellent faves-to-views ratio!
Stories that get more than 0.5 faves per 1k views are few and far between!!!
SPOILER ALERT!
Excerpt from the story.
Quote:
... Oh, that's wonderful. I'm being fucked and I'm being watched and I'm being kissed and I'm being fondled by another man, by two men. The friend kissed me and massaged my breasts while my guy pumped his cock deep inside me...
End quote.
COFFEE TABLE FOR THREE by MrMsScrewloose is an excellent wife sex story: 4.7 = 94%, β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘!