by gizmo52242
Straight to the point. I realy enjoyed reading this. Would love to read more.
This was a well crafted story, using no extra words to describe a hot experience. Very basic story, hotter because of no unnecessary words or conversation or descriptions. A "just right" use of the language, not too little, not too much, just right. Sparce, but perfectly adequate, that's what I meant to say.
Fucking load of rubbish Written by a total wanker