All Comments on 'Coffee with My Mother-in-law'

You kind of lost me with the peanut butter but i voted 5 because I think this story deserves better than the sub 4 score it currently has. Nicely done.

That is one of the weirdest stories I've read here. I don't know whether to compliment you on your imagination or recommend psychiatric help. :-)

By the way, lent is leant. Lent is a religious holiday.

I debated between a 4 or 5 and finally decided on 5*. Great imagination and the psychiatrist can pick someone else's wallet clean.

This was a terrific story, I really loved it. I didn't know I had this fantasy until I read your story! The build-up was nice and slow. Great dialogue too. Really well done. I love old women stories where the women's bodies are portrayed in all their wrinkly saggy glory. I hope there are more stories like that somewhere.

Great read

I loved this

I wanted to like this but frankly I feel like this story is more about you and your personal kinks than a hot fantasy. Joan is so ridged at the beginning, but her some how manifesting her years of abuse as a dominate that makes you doggie play is ridiculous. You weren’t submissive to Leanne that we can tell. I hated how Joan spoke in the story, the use of phrases like “white stuff” or “thingy” for over a year is chlidish. Joan didn’t evolve until you brought Kate into the story and even that evolution was slight. That’s not how human psychology works, even with damaged people.