by CriticalThinker
Subile eroticism meets a wonderful love story.
It is simply a fluently written, captivating and multifaceted story with protagonists that you immediately find sympathetic and with whom you can sympathize as a reader. Critikalthinker is a writer in the truest sense of the word, he writes eroticism and is far from the typical pornographic stories on Literotica. He appeals to a special readership and they appreciate him.
Beautiful story! Well-written and erotic. Not the slam-bam-thank-you-ma'am you often come across!
Beautifully written but a tad too long. You really do NOT have to tie up ALL loose ends. A few things left unsaid would have been better. Finally, as an engineer, a PhD and a maths lover, I really loved Neeraja. Cheers