All Comments on 'Coincidence or Fate?'

Well written, properly constructed...and just plain silly. 3*

Envious. Tis a consummation devoutly to be wished.

Don’t we all Ming for those early days of blissful innocence, before we had to go to work, had to be adults and do what society demanded? How many of us have had that one night stand, been attracted and responded to an impossible love? How many have wished that some tall dark and handsome stranger would magically appear and sweep us off our feet?

Cute story. Nicely done, even if she wouldn’t have responded to being forced into a first kiss wuite that way…or would