All Comments on 'Cold & Native'

Fascinating. Thanks

This was an excellent story, thanks

Your story was not very long but very articulate and most interesting. I guess I'll just have to wait for part 2.

I'm currently working on Ch.2. If you think you've got what it takes to edit it, since I seem to be unable to find an editor elsewhere, message me on the forums.

Really looking forward to chap 2 and more!

So let me see if I have this right. This male Alaskan finds a female non-human who has a horse head and rear legs with hooves and he is so attracted to "it" that he gets a hard on and then screws her? Now I see why people in the southern USA don't think very highly of Alaskans!

Yes,,a strange one,,,and as 75% of most stories on here,,its started and never finished,,such a waste of readers time,,

I don't t care if it is unedited. I really liked the story and would want to read more!