All Comments on 'Cold As Ice Ch. 02'

Another great installment WW. I'm trying to figure out if you have given us enough to figure out who number 4 is yet? I wonder how long in the story will it be before we see the four or the "moles" finally be caught by the Crowbar, or some significant progress e made on their identity by Don? Thanks again for the great read!

Some of you got it, and all too easily. I must be making them too easy. :-) As to clues... the next three stories are going to give a lot of background, a lot of buildup, and then a stunning! climactic conclusion... and then on to the next year stories (in story years, of course). The clues to who Number 4 is haven't really been given, but should be obvious. And as to who the Shadow Man is, a huge clue has already been given (which is why Don knows who it is, of course), and more are to come...

The man behind Bettina's ordeal being the Shadow Man is a big clue

In your last three series you brought 3 of Crowbar's minor enemies to the brink of destruction only to save them at the end. And I believe Wargrave will end up being forced to into working for the FBI as his options are cut off and I think "Number 4", otherwise known as the "Shadow Man" has crossed a line where Wargrave will turn on him and throw him to the Iron Crowbar and FBI to take apart.

Good story. Ideas but no real indication of who No 4 is.

The question I keep asking myself is WHY every time you mention the press reporting ( ie Bettina and Priya doing their field location segments) you have them shouting into microphone. Unless it’s always windy in T & C that they could speak normally. Good chapter.

*****Damn good chapter. Thanks for sharing.