All Comments on 'Cold Blue Steel'

Out of all the stories that I have read here at literotica, this was one of the best. It was well written and well thought out. I would like to read a follow up if there is one submitted.

This story is exciting, literate and HOT!! Proves we can have it all....

play achieves the E in this forum--The judges are as sick as the writer and the other creeps whose little dickies get hard reading and writing this crap. Wish all you guys would stick to fucking each other.

Absolutely unbelieveable. Well written, but downright unbelievable, if not simply weird.

-- KK in Texas

Very well written,if as some of the others have said, slightly unbeleivable. However I am willing to let the reality of such a situation slide to the wayside for we are, in fact reading a fiction tale and it requires a certain amount of disbelief to enjoy. I chose to enjoy it for you did craft it marvelously from begining to end with enough development of the characters in the early portion to give we readers the small sense of understanding. I would like to read more of your writings and express my appreciation for what you have written thus far. Not everyone is going to like it, but you do not write to please others now do you? Until then I remain...

My only question is-will there be a sequel? Loved it absolutely!

It reads well, and maybe was even written by a woman with a rape fantasy. The trouble is that some sick fuck could become emboldened to do something like this, most likely with a woman who was not so pleased. Also, the date-rape drug that was used could well have been dangerous.

regardless of the opinions!

the ideas in individuals' plots are just that; ideas. Not pure facts or happenings. If that same plot had happened between two aliens or some kind of fantasty creature would there have been such a negative response?

I am feeling that the writer was focusing more on the two main characters scene of domination and being dominated than of how they got there. In real life, yes it would have been a crime -- but think about this, lead guitarist in a real club hauling the passed out body of some volumptuous chic out of the bar who is KNOWN for shooting guys down??? Yeah, that'd have drawn a lotta attention from more than one person, ya think?

In real life, beautiful women are also smart enough to know to not get all jazzy dressed up and go (alone)

into second class places (alone)

and shoot guys down on a regular basis (alone).

Dressing nice maybe but dressed to the nines in sequins and pearls? Not likely? Not even in new orleans baby!

Most would at least know a fella for safety to dick-block for them. Travel with another woman or two, or at least know the bartender.

So relax yourselves, more of this story totally based on fiction (duh- this is literotica those of you who are throwing the haterism around) & the basis of it is more about the topic of raw human nature of dom and sub natures in men and women.

plain and simple. I think the storyline is believable especially in todays society and written well.

How does this become EROTIC LITERATURE for Normal people?

A sad day for this forum

If you don't like it, don't rate or review it. Click the X at the top and be on your merry little way.

I, however, found myself rather intrigued by reading this. Perhaps there is more to come for those two?

Enjoyed the story. And that's all it is, a story. Well written and I would like to see more from the author.

Thank you very kindly for all your responses and feedback. This was my first submission on Literotica; I'm a long time reader of the nonconsent section of this site. I'm also a woman who decidedly has rape fantasies. I must say I'm a bit surprised that some people found it to be so sick... after all, this IS clearly labeled as nonconsent.<br><br>

As for erotic literature for "normal people"... what is normal? I haven't a clue, and if there is such a thing, I'm not particularly interested in being it. <br><br>

My fantasies are largely the result of being raised in a very sexually repressed fundamentalist Christian household. I actually saved myself for marriage (this is something I strongly recommend against)... yet I have always had a very high sex drive. The only way I could ever hope to have sex without it being a sin WOULD have been rape. <br><br>

Yet I was also a hopeless romantic and very much into fantasy and escapism... I imagined that a man would fall in love with me and take me far away from my reality to make me his very own. I do not think this idea is all that uncommon among women, although I think I've obviously expressed it a bit differently than most.<br><br>

As for some sicko using this story to get pumped up to rape someone... that's an age-old viewpoint used in favor of censorship... and I am very much for free speech and personal responsibility. Stories don't cause rape. PEOPLE do.<br><br>

Of course I don't want to be raped; this is fantasy and as a writer I very clearly understand how different it is from reality. In fact, my sister was raped in college and it was a horrifying event for us all... yet she and I both STILL have rape and domination fantasies. I am thankful to know that many, many women have such fantasies and I am sharing my own in appreciation for those others who have gone before me to share theirs.<br><br>

This story has something of a story behind it... I wrote it as a birthday present to a former lover of mine (a guitarist; in fact I am a singer/songwriter) and tried to include both my fantasies and his... and I wanted to give it a happy ending for him. (Alas, the romance was ultimately ill-fated... but he was a splendid muse and I did some of my best work while he was in my life.)<br><br>

"Cold Blue Steel" is the only erotic story I've ever penned (when writing prose, I mostly stick to fantasy and sci-fi). I thought the ending was fascinating but admittedly kind of twisted. Nearly a year afterwards, I decided to post it here and see what sort of response I got.<br><br>

I have many projects going at present, but will try to write more soon. I have a feeling my stories will always get a strong love/hate response, but that makes it rather fun. Until next time!<br><br>

Love,

Athena

Please continue with sequel!

I've read a lot of stories on Lit, and this is most definitely one of the best-written. Nonconsent stories are always controversial, but if you buy into the possibility that someone might commit rape as a result of reading this story, you're also buying into the argument that pornography leads to all sorts of sex crimes. If that's true, then Big Brother had better keep a close watch on everyone who frequents this site. I think the story stands very well on its own, and a sequel could not add anything to this fascinating tale. What we do need is more submissions by this very talented author.

an amazing sensual story!

I guess people who didn't like stories like this and yet are reading in this category are hoping for the reluctance end of this nonconsent/reluctance spectrum. They should really get used to it. It's a risk they have to take if they browse this category (unless R and NC get separated for some reason, but I don't see how that's gonna happen).

The ultimate Trust Test is the sexiest thing ever. Be a real male and have the guts to let me decide if you are worth my love. Quite sure in real life not many self proclaimed alphas would go there.