All Comments on 'Cold Feet'

by damonX

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Excellent

Even without the pictures...It will happen again............I think I know her..........except she is married but has the same hunger.....excellent story and frankly very realistic............NOTHING like a good ass-fucking

david1096david1096about 15 years ago
Need More

I think you need to expand on this story. I would love to see some more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
much better-your writing has improved. I actually

much better-your writing has improved. I actually liked it. I was not going to read it at first since you wrote it. diff subject matter helped too. keep at it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very good

Very good story, once again. I'd love to see it go just a tiny little bit dirtier and rougher for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great to see new stuff from damon!

It's great to have you back with a couple of new stories.

You always had a certain flair with the derriere, but I agree that your writing *around* your favorite topic has improved during your hiatus. Way to go and keep 'em coming!

flswitchflswitchabout 15 years ago
Good start

Would be interesting if he emailed the photos to her fiance and see where that goes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Never happpen again?

Yeah right. She'll do whatever he wants, and he won't even have to mention the pictures. He owns her, always has, always will. She went back to him, that says it all.

JammyJimmyJammyJimmyabout 15 years ago
Good storytelling!

Really enjoyed that story, was well paced, had a smooth flow to it, and the characters seemed real. The hot bits were hot, the anticipation built nicely, and I liked how the moods changed as the story went on.

Kudos!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Why is no one making a comment about

The fact she is about to get married and she is fucking an ex-boyfriend? A slut is a slut no matter what she says. She should not be getting married. Why take any vows when she has no intention of keeping them? What she should do is tell her future husband that she made mistake and then go back to her boyfriend and become his sex slave. Now that would be a better story. Everyone knows she will go back time after time so the question has to be why go through the farce of marriage? Every slut in every story always says, "THIS WILL ONLY HAPPEN ONCE" BULLSHIT! Once a slut always a slut. It just depends on whose slut she is!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
My favorite author is back!

Another excellent damonX story.. Where have you been? This is great!

mdwdirectmdwdirectabout 15 years ago
My favorite author is back!

Another excellent damonX story.. Where have you been? This is great!

SejanusSejanusalmost 15 years ago
Mooooooore!

Keep writing! Different stories, sequels, more chapters, whatever. You are far and away the single best author in the anal category and one of the best on Lit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
so glad you're back

you're one of my favorites! this story wasn't bad, but not for me. i love stories like freshman girl and little black skirt, they are my fall backs when i don't have time to look for a new story and i want to cum.

thanks.

PolyLvrPolyLvralmost 14 years ago
NICE

I told you I'd read some more. Love the build up. The way you had her engaged in her own seduction.

koolaukoolauover 11 years ago
Outstanding!

As usual, your writing is absolutely outstanding. The little nuances add a certain reality-like, that makes one feel like being in the same room. Hopefully, you'll be writing more stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WoW!

What an amazing story! DamonX, you are the BOMB..... One of the most exciting, realistic stories I have read on this site. You are a fantastic author. Please continue with other stories. Please...... Donn

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

what an asshole the man...

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