All Comments on 'Cold Night, Warming Hearts'

...with breathless anticipation.

That was a very well written story about new love. I know that some may ask for a second chapter but this story is perfect in the ending. In a way it is a true to life story because the characters have agendas for their life that may not match the other's. I hope to see more stories written by a really good writers such as yourself.

lifts the girl onto the table?

Fun little story.

It wasn't until the second page I found out for sure that the narrator was a male. Maybe put that farther up so the mental image is more immediately established.

Also, realistically, someone would have tried using their phone to call someone, somewhere. Even if the phones are down, include the realism.

hope you continue this saga

Best story I have read this morning. Thanks for sharing looking forward to your future submissions.

Regardless of what others have said, I thoroughly enjoyed this. Identification wasn't a problem for me. Certain things that were written let me know that the narrator was indeed a man. Hope to see more from you.

Excellent! Please continue!

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Nice build-up.

This needs a sequel it was sooo amazing. (:

Great Story. PLEASE continue.

not a romance

This is not a romance. Erotic couplings at best and maybe a potential for romance if the story continues. I find this unlikely after so much time. Sad, this could have been a whole lot more.