All Comments on 'Cold Steel'

I loved this, gritty but sexy and with the redemption element coming through strong.

Very nice story , true love is the best. Sometime we make mistake in life but someone is always there to fix it for us. Hope you are happy Sarge and now life is not a bitch but true love returns for us

Quite enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Seldom read stories this long because they tend to become redundant and not continue to move the story forward.

You were very prolific in 2017 and 2018 but if the scan by these old eyes is correct only about 3 or 4 stories earlier in 2019.

One story has captured this old man's attentionhours and intend to go your earlier works with a strong belief your story telling skills will be equally apparent and hopefully even refined over the months

Only trepidation is that you may not have the time available to write the quality of work you want to provide.

Whatever the case might be for the future am confident reading of your other works will bring hours and hours of reading entertainment and enjoyment.

Of them. Please

Nice gritty cop story worthy of the five stars I gave it, and worthy of another chapter or two.

well written, I really liked this story and it was not too long also

It's nice to read a story that evolves into love! And that you chose to include anal oral in it too, not many pay attention to true lesbian loving! Thank you!

Now this one can have a few more chapters I think. Very good

Women can teach us what women want. Friendship, trust, understanding, care ... and when it comes to sex, use your mouth and forget about the size of your cock. Be attracted to each other as human beings, whether you are a manly man or a strong woman, and the world will be a better place.

Well done, five stars from me. One minor comment. Some women are squeamish about mixing cunnilingus and analingus, as they are fearful of introducing germs into their vaginas. Hopefully some female readers will provide their thoughts on this?

This was a nice change from the stories I normally read. I really enjoyed it a lot, and loved the ending. I do have one concern, how did Jace get into the house and get Max's gun in the dark before the alarm activated. Not that it bothered me enough to stop reading, just curious. OMG! Lanny, everyone knows a Lanny, it's just too funny that he's such a goofball, but is still a good guy. Would loved to have had Addie throw her sopping wet panties my way. A well written 5 star story. Thanks

I'm turned off by the gag-'em till they puke on a man's cock, stories, and vastly prefer the kinder-gentler Stories, that kind of explain WHY a woman is attracted to Women, and not attracted to Men.

I'm feeling down, and this story perked me right up. Thanks for writing it.

Enjoyed this story and would definitely read more about these characters, they seem to have a lot life. Thank you for sharing.

another good story it was

Being in balance, saving each other, is a good start for sapphic love romamce ....... Its just humming in my mind, is being on the force really so pressuring, so alcohol is the saving after a shift ? ........ Those people are in the line of fire in different kind of meanings, so there should be a care center in general in each big police station, for there savior as well or? ....... Hopefulli Addie is Maxines help out of the bottle

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Love an happy ending

Very confusing. Apparently this is the next Max story yet Max is the only character to carry on, so no continuity. Yes I did notice the publication dates are out of order but if this is supposed to run to an order then surely someone would still be familiar.

Obviously the more recently written stories are smoother, less jerky almost; I have to say if this had been the first tale I might not be so invested in seeing where Max goes.

Could do with a Max Pemberton storyline in the biog so that we know where to go next...

The most recent comment prompted me to post a timeline of Max stories on my profile.

Here's the posting in its entirety below:

Hello Max Fans,

A recent comment has prompted me to summarize the timeline of Max’s stories, which is below:

Maelstrom

Deception

Blindsided

Jackknifed

Tailspin

Cold Steel

Hot Steel

Pink Ice

Betrayal

Loss of Innocence

Revenge is Best Served Cold

To Hell … And Back

I started with “Cold Steel” as a one off, but given my interest in the character and the favorable reception, I kept writing. You’ll note that “Cold Steel” is much shorter and less detailed than later stories, as I’ve gotten a feel for the characters. The series has allowed me to grow as a writer. After I wrote “To Hell and Back,” I decided to go backwards in time and write Maelstrom, which is set much earlier in Max’s career. The most recent published story is “Tailspin,” which still predates Cold Steel (where Lanny is now Max’s partner). I intend to publish more stories that follow Tailspin and still predate Cold Steel. Sorry for the confusion, but I never dreamed I would be writing this many Max stories, but it seems both you readers and I am addicted to them. Look for “Crash Landing” to be published soon.

I am grateful for the positive reception I’ve gotten for this series. It’s been fun seeing Max grow as a character, and to fill out her world with a number of multi-dimensional characters as a supporting cast.

Mistress SWP