All Comments on 'Collateral Ch. 09'

longer please

I love this story! I look for updates every day and do a little squeal when you post. Your writing is really exceptionally good. You are talented. Love the slow build up and multiple character dynamics.

More please.....

I want to thank everyone who's reading and commenting on my story. Given the site's format, it is difficult to reply individually and be sure that the people who commented would see the replies.

I must apologize that my chapters are short. They have already been cut, so to speak, and there's no going back at this point. I just think that each chapter has a flow and that is why each one is the way it is.

Nonetheless, your comments flatter me. It means that you like my story enough to feel the need to scold me :)

You can always check my tumblr blog for more of my writing. I hope you will continue to enjoy my story.

All the best,

Laura.

Great story, will we have to wait for a whole month for an update.