All Comments on 'Collateral Damage'

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Smiffy69Smiffy69almost 3 years ago

Odd. Will there be more? Is that it? Sure your day would be worse if you get taken out. Can’t see the point of this.

hindsight2020hindsight2020almost 3 years ago

A bunch of unrelated events does not make a story.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What a downer. I come here for mind fun. LOVE. slap hapy papy #9

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Well that was weird. Not sure I got the point other than this poor woman had the worst and last day of her life.

someoneothersomeoneother11 months ago

Strangely I keep thinking that no decent sniper would take a shot when as likely to hit another person as the target.

dikupinyadikupinya8 months ago
its a start

please continue

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