by Cameron_J_Morales
I understand the gals always get excited over big dicks. They talk about size first in real life, so you gi ve them lots to talk about. But, you have gone too big. You are 1 in a million or more big. Too much. Anything over 6" is note worthy, so back it down in the future. You alienate your male readers and scare the tiny dicks away completely. Nobody wants to be reminded of their ,uhhh shortcomings.
Marie is nice. Confident gal is unique, especially not stuck on herself or with jocks,.
Liked your story a lot /not bad for a first time . don't get discouraged. hope to see more